This looks nice and stylish with a good sense of genre.
You need to sort out the order the credits occur in your sequence - and add in a few like the Candi ident.
The final sequence should be slowed down a bit, I'm not sure we are really clear who the sequence is about and whether the characters are connected - this is possibly because the last section almost happens too quickly to establish connections..
Also, keep working on the soundtrack -needs to be finished by Friday !
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